Here’s the tenth installment of my series on How to Write a Good Romance (or any story really) based on what not to do:
10: There’s a case of pop in the boot.
If you’re from eastern Long Island, like I am, you say things a certain way. We call it soda. Up in Buffalo where I went to school, they called it pop. Keep this in mind if you’re writing for characters that are from a different region of the country than you are.
I recently read a book that took place in the Carolinas, but the protagonist kept saying things like she was going to take the lift up to the third floor or put her groceries in the boot of her car. It was obvious the author was from the UK, yet she didn’t take care to edit out words that folks in the Carolina’s wouldn’t use.
If your writing dialogue for charters that are from anywhere other than where you grew up, be sure to research regional dialects for things like:
Would your characters say …
- Sneakers or trainers
- Ball cap or Baseball hat
- Pop, soda or coke
If they lived in Boston, everything there is described as “wicked,” however, as a New Yorker myself, I’d be more likely to describe things as cool, never wicked.
To be honest, I cheat a little. All my novels have heroines from my small, hometown of Wading River, NY. Being from this town, I’m apt to be accurate in how my heroines talk.
Jennifer Geoghan, author of:
- The Falling Series
- If Love is a Lie: A Partly True Love Story
- The Family History Quick Start Guide: Genealogy Made Easy
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